Here are some of the ideas you have shared for our year 4 poem. 

 

If you haven't sent your similes, metaphors or alliteration in then please do.

 

Albert –  shy squirrels, shyly, sneakingly, sensationally smart.                                     Will – Magical, mysterious, misty moonlit meadows.

 

Ruby Suddes – the leaves fell from the trees like they left home.                              Izzy – An Autumn leaf is as beautiful as a nightingale.

 

Safa – An autumn leaf is a crispy crisp.                                                                         

 

Olivia – A frosty, frozen flake flew across the fur tree forest.

 

Reba – the leaves fell from the trees like snowflakes falling from the clouds.

 

Alina – the ferocious frost freezes the fair flowers   

 

Srihan -  An Autumn leaf is rainbow.

 

Frankie – An Autumn leaf is a crunched up cornflake.

 

Ishbel – Mysterious mist clears revealing the moon, mystifying many.

 

Lennon – The freezing fields feel fragile but friendly.

 

Amelia – east elephants eat Easter eggs.

 

Nikolas - Autumn leaf is a butterfly with broken wings

 

Gyaan - "A magical maroon moon moved majestically"